Writers With Wrinkles
Writers With Wrinkles
Beth McMullen and Lisa Schmid
The 4 First-Page Mistakes That Get You Rejected Fast, with editor Joel Brigham
54 minutes Posted Aug 17, 2026 at 8:00 am.
Welcome back, Joel Brigham
Why we built this episode: the First Pages problem
What actually gets an agent's attention
Tip: a compelling, distinct voice
Tip: immediate narrative momentum (in medias res)
Tip: character agency and desire
Why authors info-dump in chapter one (and why to cut it)
Why agents hate prologues
Does anyone actually read prologues?
The big four: tension, suspense, mystery, unfairness
How to build tension and suspense
How to build mystery
How to build unfairness (the reader's favorite)
Fixing world-building info dumps: the two-highlighter trick
The breadcrumb rule + making dialogue a weapon, not a funnel
How to world-build with subtlety
Where the inciting incident should go, by genre
Final advice: agents are the gatekeepers
Wrap-up and where to find Joel
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Your opening pages have about 30 seconds to keep a literary agent reading — and most manuscripts lose that fight before the first paragraph ends. Developmental editor Joel Brigham returns to unpack exactly what makes an agent stop reading (and what makes them keep going): the four ingredients — tension, suspense, mystery, and unfairness — that hook a reader in the first few pages. He breaks down why agents almost universally reject prologues, the two-highlighter trick for catching your own in...