Describe a website you like to visit

You should say:

When you found it: last year

What it is about online shopping and selling site

How often you visit it: weekly

Why you like this website: it is convenient for shopping

开头段

I am a shopaholic（购物狂）, and one of my promises to myself is to make sure that I buy one item weekly as a reward for my hard work and patience in the company I work in at the moment.

Since I am busy during the day and when I finish work, most shopping malls and marts are already closed, I decided to find a way to shop even when I am at work.

Then, my colleague told me to visit Taobao.com, a popular online shopping site in my country.

It is somewhat similar to international sites（国际网站） like eBay and Amazon, so I decided to check it out.

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解析

1. shopaholic（购物狂）---拓展workaholic 工作狂alcoholic 酒鬼

2. make promise to oneself 承诺某人

3. make sure 确保= guarantee

4.as a reward for my hard work 努力工作的奖励

5. check it out 尝试一下 try it

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I was like a child who saw her favorite toys at the site.

I beamed（发射出）with excitement upon seeing the items on sale on the site.

They almost have anything under the sun（天下万物）from school supplies to home appliances, gadgets, and personal stuff.

Well, I tried to order one pair of running shoes, and I was amazed at how fast they replied to my inquiries（询问） and in a matter of days, I had already received the item.

From then on, I have been a regular customer of the site and take pleasure in purchasing some items on a weekly basis.

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解析

1.人物定从 a child who 拓展a child who / a parent who / a person who…

2. under the sun（全世界）e.g. he is the most friendly person I have ever met under the sun.                   

3.order sth. 下单买……

4.From then on 从那之后拓展from now on 从今往后

5.on a weekly basis 以周为单位拓展on a monthly / yearly basis

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Aside from buying, one can also venture（风险） into an online business in this site, and I even tried selling some of my old stuff, and I was surprised to see that they sold like hotcakes and I earned some extra money.

That is why I find this site very convenient for shopping any time of the day. 

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解析

Aside from 除此之外= apart from = besides

Be surprise to do sth